borntobeawriter

Pink, Jayleigh, as usual: Thanks for the great review! And Karsten, wow! Can I hire you? lol I'm going to pull back witht the Descendants for some time to work ...

Hi! I've edited the three chapters I've put up. Thanks to everyone who has commented and reviewed!! :D Tanya Prologue Moira Haney wrapped her arms protectively around her distended belly. ...

Pink! Everyone else got here before me! Crap! LOL. Everything that needed to be said was said, as per my opinion. I loved this chapter, they are getting better every ...

Okay, Hi! I was told that my chapters were too long so I made the fourth chapter in two parts, if that's better. Please comment, I hope it will clear ...

LOL, great few sentences...But...what happens next?! LOL Tanya

Hey Pink! Thanks for asking me to review! Our car ride was quite , in fact, I didn’t speak to him once I assume you meant 'quiet' or quite silent...Or ...

thanks Aquamarine :D

Hi, I am in need of some assistance please lo. I finally got around to editing the info I was given in reviews but I mistakenly locked it and now ...

Ok, what went so horribly wrong between chapters 2 and 3? You guys seemed to like the previous one! LOL Seriously, Jayleigh, how can I take offense? If I'm asking ...

David! Thanks for coming online! You really are the best person (as per this particular story) to comment because you've read the first version and I really wanted to know ...

Chapter 3 “If you are to be my protectors, does that mean you will stay here with me and Mommy?” Rhee asked looking up to her brothers and sisters. “We ...

Hi ! Hi! I'm alive, sorry about the delay, haven't been home much in the past few days! So, on with the review! I could totally handle this guy right? ...

Hey Pink, I'm still reading, I just hadn't seen that chapter 7 and 8 are out. So, yeah, I read it and I have no nitpicks. The story is interesting ...

Hey Pink! Loved this chapter. Much like Jayleigh, I got hooked on what was happening and didn't right away see the mistakes so I reread lol. These are my nitpicks: ...

Hi Jayleigh, I was going through your portfolio and I found this short story. I do not want to tell you that I LOVED IT because I don't want you ...