borntobeawriter

What is there to comment on Ash? Great piece! I loved it! Gold Star! Tanya

Hey Pink, Apparently I was beaten to your review and Aquamarine did a fine job of it, I have nothing to add except to say that I love this, hehe ...

Haha! Well, you seem to have already gotten quite a good review - I can not find anything else to add, great job, tell me when you post the 2nd ...

Ok, I've just finished editing this post, hope you appreciate the changes :D Chapter 2 Noah walked the barely-lit hallways of the orphanage searching for . . . something. What, ...

Haha, no Meadow, her sister hasn't explained anything to her because she joined on her own and figured it out on her own. That's my sister for you: she's independant ...

You have done well young Padawan! I'm glad you modified the line up there that I suggested, great work Susie! Please PM me when you post the next chapter Tanya

Yay, Fourteen! Thanks for telling me Jayleigh. the kings and queens were loosing their battle, and Summer would be queen. Losing, isn't it? Well, that was my only nitpick. As ...

I know! They were pissing me off! And I'm the writer ! LOL

OH! Jayleigh got here before me! LOL A few typos... My only ‘girl friend’ that accepted me they way I was. The? I unmated the TV and drowned myself in ...

Chapter 1 Every night, Dreico liked to contemplate how his day had gone. He slept well only if he had the satisfaction of having done something useful. This day, he ...

Yay! Finally, thirteen! Thanks for PMing me Jayleigh! :D I tried adjusting my positin , but that only made me scream out in agony Position, maybe? “I’m starting to agree ...

And by the way, she was fourteen when she got pregnant but fifteen when she gave birth ...lol

Evi, Pink, Talulah and Ash, Thanks guys for the reviews. William is pure evil and he will be explained much further; remember, this is only a prologue. The next chapter ...

Hi Red, Well, you had me totally hooked from line one. I really enjoyed the flow of this first part and I have absolutely nothing negative to say . . ...

Hi Elinor! Okay, I just read your first two parts and I have the distinct impression this is turning into a Santa Claus0type story. Very good and interesting. A few ...