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Re: Monarch Butterfly [2]
Hey Pink! Everyone got here before me so I don't have any nitpicks. I like the fast pace of this, no issue whatsoever. I assume you will be adding more ...
Jan 25, 2010 -
Re: Unrequited
Hi! Wow, I really like this piece. It was very compelling, I needed to read the next sentence. But now I'm burning up with curiosity. Who is she? Who is ...
Jan 24, 2010 -
Re: The Descendants - Prologue
Ok, I was told that my first chapter started too late and I subsequently did too many flashbacks. So, I did a prologue. I know many of you aren't fans ...
Jan 24, 2010 -
Re: Shifters: Chapter 2
Hey Suz, Here for a review, duh lol except he didn’t see or hear the other one that came out from behind a couple of trees. Caught off guard, he ...
Jan 24, 2010 -
Re: Shifters: Chapter 1 part 2
Hey Suz, it's me! And guess what? I'm your first review...:D A lone garage was attached to it as well, where my old Mazda hid. Shouldn't it be a Toyota? ...
Jan 21, 2010 -
Re: Thorns & Roses [7]
Jayleigh, you aren't reading my stuff anymore but your first at Pink's! Ha! LOL Pink! I don't care if anyone says it's cliché; I loved it! Keep it coming! I'm ...
Jan 21, 2010 -
Re: Lady Death 3
Chapter 3 : Edited! Chapter 3 “You’re . . . You’re leaving me? I’ll be left here, alone?” Noah repressed a sigh. He had known this would be hard, telling ...
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: Shifters: Chapter 1
Hey Pink, thanks for her review :D The lifetime thing will be explained later on, I read her notes about this and it's got nothing on Twilight, don't worry about ...
Jan 17, 2010 -
Re: Silver Blade chapter One Part Two
Hi, here to do a review! I wished I had a Father to comfort me, but he had gone missing many years ago This sentence here seems out of place. ...
Jan 17, 2010 -
Re: Silver Blade: Chapter One-Part One
So far, I really enjoy this. I'm going to read the second part right away ! Tanya :D
Jan 17, 2010 -
Re: Lady Death 2
Oh Wow Kaywiia, thank you, thank you so much!
Jan 16, 2010 -
Re: Lady Death 2
Suz, Pink, thanks guys! I'm glad you enjoy this! :D
Jan 16, 2010 -
Re: Rohan - Prologue: War and Tragedy
Hi Ahmed, Thanks for the compliment about my reviewing skills. Here I go: Every gust of wind caused the men the grip tighter to their sword's hilt . Hmm, the ...
Jan 16, 2010 -
Re: Lady Death 1
Thanks Ash for the review and good luck catching up! LOL
Jan 16, 2010 -
Re: Guardians
Hey rustic-rebel, I'm here for a review, obviously :D Here I go: I have always known. Somewhere inside I understood that humans were not alone on this earth. Little did ...
Jan 16, 2010
