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Re: Astianna: Chapter Two
Hey Kaedee, I'm Tanya, here to do a review. Unfortunately . . . I have nothing to point out! :D I didn't see any mistakes and I have no nitpicks. ...
Feb 6, 2010 -
Re: My guardian dog 2 (edited!) OLD
Hey everyone!! Thanks to all for the great reviews. There's a thing or two I'd like to point out: 1) Yes, it really is a fantasy story. Give it a ...
Feb 6, 2010 -
Re: Shifters: Chapter 3 part 2
Love it as usual. DOn't have much to say, but then again, I've already reviewed it lol Love you xx
Feb 6, 2010 -
Re: My guardian dog (Edited!) OLD
Thank you fire of dawn. I was going to write down on my next posts to stop correcting these. If you google them, they both work. Maybe in the States ...
Feb 4, 2010 -
Re: Shifters: Prologue (fixed)
Hey Suz, Even though I did warn you that people had a love/hate thing going on, I think it's really good and I really enjoyed the fixing of it. Love ...
Feb 1, 2010 -
Re: Shifters: Chapter 3
Haha! First one here! Great job on this chapter!! Love you xx
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Wooden Pints and Funeral Pyres
Hi there Krupp, I'm Tanya and I'd love to say that I'm here to do a review but there's nothing to critique! Ranger Hawk has already mentioned what I would ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: The White Knight Chapter Four First Fight
Hi, It's me, Tanya again :D She stood at thee edge of a forest the loving and hard work from both my wife and me to get it to where ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: The White Knight Chapter Three Part C Utofamia's Beginnings
Yikes! I forgot to say hi in the previous chapter! So, Hi! :D Maria walked slowly to a tree and slumped down to the ground, resting her back against the ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: The White Knight Chapter Two Utofamia (edited)
"Maybe he had left, thinking he killed me," Maybe he left, thinking he had killed me' sounds better she had been writing note to King Christoph. writing a note or ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: The White Knight Chapter One Nightmares and Reality-Edited
Hi! I'm Tanya, here to do a review: reaching out its claws to tear her apart... The young woman found herself sitting in a classroom, with the teacher's voice droning ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: My guardian dog (Edited!) OLD
Ok now. This is the uh, third editing I believe. I really wanted to thank everyone profusely for their help. I'm thrilled that this story is getting such great reviews. ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: X
Hi Lauren! I just read your two chapters and I am intrigued. Can't wait to read the second part! I loved the flow of it and I have no nitpicks ...
Jan 27, 2010 -
Re: Lady Death 4 (Edited!)
Chapter 4 Tya flinched as she heard Noah’s whispered words through her mirror of souls. Who was she? What was she? She was . . . Lady Death. Watching over, ...
Jan 27, 2010 -
Re: Shifters: Chapter 2 part 2
Crap! Suz, now you'll have to send it to me before everyone else...LOL *I'll get here before you next time, Daydreamer*... lol Suz, I love this chapter. Because I read ...
Jan 26, 2010
