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Hey! You were supposed to mention that I was the first review...And that I pointed out something you hadn't noticed; that Tony and Crys now have something in common, they ...

Hey Sionarama, I saw there were 17 views but no comment and I decided to rectify, so, here I am! I'm not sure if this is meant as a short ...

Hey Kitx, here for the second review as promised. I hope the previous one was helpful :D I feel like I’m on the verge of a nervous break down. I’m ...

Hi there KitxKat, I'm Tanya, here to do a review. I have to agree with mmink that this chapter is a bit choppy but a good lesson on punctuation dialogue ...

Ok. Parts of this you guys have already been seen but there's some differences too. Enjoy! Tanya Chapter 6 “You’ve been watching over him, haven’t you?” Millie’s kind blue eyes ...

Haha! It's my turn to be late. Sorry! I caught your message last night but if I had read it -quickly- I wouldn't have given you a proper review. Now, ...

Hey guys, Suz, oh yes I did lol. But there's a reason, you'll see it in the next chapter or two. Stori, no I didn't read Pendragon but please just ...

Ok, I was waiting to post this so that everyone had the chance to chance up but my sister demanded -I'd say 'nag' but it's too strong a word- that ...

HAHA! Who knows? Maybe at some point there's something we'll notice that you didn't mouhahahah

Hey baby girl! Wow, Lauren's right; nice twist. Ok. Two things though. First, it doesn't make much sense to me that the grand-father is in his fifties unless he was ...

No problem at all. That's what ideas are for :D Tanya

Hi there Snickerdooly, Here to do the review. Ok now, I noticed a lot of sentences who are in desperate need of commas. I won't go back to mention them ...

Hey there Durr, As Lena said, I prefered the fact that the second part was told by a character. That being said, I found it was one hell of an ...

Hey baby girl, Yup, I definitely enjoyed this one. I'm glad you explained how in only three weeks she was able to kick some serious ass. Only little nitpick: When ...

Ok, hi there MissMari and welcome to YWS! My name is Tanya and I'm here for your review. Let me start off by saying that this story intrigued me. It ...