borntobeawriter

I'm first, I'm first, I'M FIRST ! Ok, Issues, I know lol Except for your headache does everyone seem normal Yes, tell me, how does everyone seem? Everything, maybe? I ...

Ok guys. You've been patient with me and I wanted to thank you. I know you've had no plot to work with so far, not sure where this is going. ...

Hey RH! Just do what I do: I head back to my own previous chapters to see who commented....;)

Hey guys! Thanks so much for the great review!! And Ranger? Yeah, Riley's disappearance is explained in the next chapter. They told me they needed a little space from one ...

Ok now guys (gals), I need help here. I had to find a way to describe the history without it seeming as an info dump. I don't know if I ...

Well hello there! I'm glad I found this chapter in the forum. I really like this story and it's a pleasure following it. But would you pm me for the ...

Ha! Well, I love it as much as I loved it yesterday when I reviewed it. Great review, Ranger, by the way. I knew there was a reason I asked ...

Hi Shubhi, Ok, the nitpicks were pretty much pointed out. I wanted to mention one thing though. Amanda says that she lets the stupid urchins touch her. I was under ...

Hi there Shubhi! I'm here for a review, as requested. I hope it will be helpful :D She won’t kill me, I mumbled to myself. This should not be part ...

Chapter 6 Soothing arms gathered around me and I knew without looking that they were my Mom’s. There was nothing better than a mother’s comfort when all you wanted to ...

Chapter 7 10 years later William plucked an olive from the food tray on the table before him. He leaned back with a contented sigh, grateful for being alone, in ...

Hi there Jokerless, I'm Tanya, here for a review :D Elsa felt as though the wind was chasing her, she could hear the and honking and general noise that emitted ...

Great job and I'm the first reply! Woohoo! Well, I just read it like 30 minutes ago so I could review it for you but I checked out what you ...

Oh. Oh! Oh my god, I thought the other girls were exagerating when they said you made them cry. Well, they aren't. I'm bawling like a baby. Great work. Tanya

Hey there Ranger Hawk! As far as the climbing up the wall part. I read the icicle thing and thought, "Are you kidding me?" I think it's a good idea ...