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Re: The Christmas Code
Pagan rituals to compliment the season, to bring about the solistice to give us a reason. Standing tall, majestic, gift to the royalty of the UK. This somehow doesn't seem ...
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: My Dog and Me
Lovely poem! I love the ending! My only suggestion is to throw in a few more descriptive adjectives or words to spice it up. Other than that, very sweet!
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: My Dog and Me
Lovely poem! I love the ending! My only suggestion is to throw in a few more descriptive adjectives or words to spice it up. Other than that, very sweet!
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: "Forbidden To Forsake" Chapter 1
Hmmm...nice writing style, and has real potential, but i find the plot...or at least the beginning intro a bit cliche? older man, young girl, old house- i think it could ...
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: Humanity
Just gave me the chills. I love the use of the word ecstatic! Humanity is such a bold topic, this poem manages to expose the venerability and the harshness of ...
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: Short Popcorn Chapter
Give your harshest criticism please! Rip it to shreds if you like! 264 Prinsengracht The room is small and dark, with the only light coming from a single window near ...
Jan 1, 2011
