bookworm27

I totally agree with the vocab points-not my favorite part either. The essay is not quite finished-I'll put up the conclusion soon. Thanks for all the commentary!

Here's the link if you're Merci!

Hey! I'd love if you could review my song analysis paper...it's due tomorrow, not quite finished, and im getting increasingly desperate as the due day approaches.

Thanks for your review! I do feel that I am way too superfluously pretentious in this essay-I'm not a big fan of the style, but my english teacher insists upon ...

Alright, so this is due tomorrow (thank goodness for snowdays) so I am posting it here and refreshing it when I have new parts... Billy Joel’s stardom can be attributed ...

My english teacher says to always use that when in doubt, because it's stronger.

Eeks! I have an analyzation paper of Downeaster Alexa by Billy Joel due on Friday--I'm having serious writers block(gasp I used that phrase)!!! Here's all I have so far, and ...

I'd love a review if you have a chance! Take your pick! -Booky

Dark clouds hover above my head They follow where ever I tread There is no day, only night Yet the flames of hope are my light Wonderful start! Nothing but ...

Allo! Booky here to review, comments in bold! Comment before i commence-I'm a big fan of line breaks. Big fan. Huge. So much so, that I will be that annoying ...

Hello! Booky here to review-comments in bold! Don’t cry child, Nice repeat throughout Don’t put up a wall. When you are feeling lonely, When they don’t answer your call. Side ...

Thanks so much Kafkaescence! I always love your reviews! I'll be sure to edit this--I normally don't just throw something down, but it came to me, and I said what ...

Hello! Booky here to review! Comments are in bold: Abracadabra Nice start! I love onomatopoeias! He prepares for the stage, donning his crinkled, black plastic top hat I'd eighty-six the ...

Hello! Booky here to review-comments are in bold! My hair whipped from side to side Oh dear. Been listening to a bit too much Willow Smith have we? as I ...

Hello! Booky here to review-comments are in bold! My hair whipped from side to side Oh dear. Been listening to a bit too much Willow Smith have we? as I ...