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Hello, Booky here to review, comments in bold! "Where can i find her?" He stumbled into the bar for the fourth time this week. I really like the opening-sets the ...

Thanks so much! I'll be sure to specify with the characters!

I have to say, I'm really impressed with this poem.Yyou obviously know the artistry of writing, and you shine here! Spectrum of col-col-numbers I think this means cold numbers, but ...

Hello, Booky here to review! Comments are in CAPS) It is dark. The winding labyrinth lets in no light HMMM NOT TO SOUND PICKY, BUT WHY WOULD THE LABYRINTH LET ...

Hello, Booky here to review! Comments are in CAPS) It is dark. The winding labyrinth lets in no light HMMM NOT TO SOUND PICKY, BUT WHY WOULD THE LABYRINTH LET ...

Hello, Booky here to review! Comments are in CAPS) It is dark. The winding labyrinth lets in no light HMMM NOT TO SOUND PICKY, BUT WHY WOULD THE LABYRINTH LET ...

Hi everybody! Long time no writing! Well, I have a comparison Gilgamesh/Animal farm essay this week, and here is my outline for it. It focuses on manipulation (assigned topic :() ...

Booky here to review, comments in bold! Accusing eyes pass somehow the word pass doesn't do it for me here, it breaks the flow an uncaring i know it's nitpicky, ...

Booky here to review, comments in bold! Accusing eyes pass somehow the word pass doesn't do it for me here, it breaks the flow an uncaring i know it's nitpicky, ...

Thanks so much! I find out my grade for it tomorrow, so we'll see if my english teacher feels the same way!

Thanks so much for the input! This was for an english assignment in September (which I never got back...) that was to write a chapter-ish thing on a moment in ...

Teehee, I love these! They remind me of the days of crayola and nilla wafers!!

Sorry about the formatting, I couldn't use the tab button, one it looks rather mushed. Also, I never really had the opportunity to recopy the edited version- I'll be sure ...

Booky here to review! Comments in bold-enjoy! Glassy-eyed, hidden how about engulfed by spiderwebs? or is that my weirdo mental thesaurus talking? behind spiderwebs and a sea of ashen dust, ...

I really enjoyed reading this piece. I love the relativity of time gone passed, and I think you did a very nice job in the execution.