bookworm27

I'm trying to just start out by writing something, anything really, even if its crapola. So here it goes, and Ill add more in chunks: Some things don’t start from ...

Thanks for your review! I'm trying to figure out spaces and everything, but thanks for the input!

Alright, Booky here to review! Firstly, I really did like this piece (all of your writing is so darn good) but I have a few things: 1. "shovel straddled upon ...

Hello! So, I have yet another English essay due Friday, and this here is a work in progress: Please comment, rite your thoughts, dislikes, etc! Note: It is far from ...

Hello! So, I have yet another English essay due Friday, and this here is a work in progress: Please comment, rite your thoughts, dislikes, etc! Note: It is far from ...

So for a total fantasy/sci-fi geek like me, I;ve been exposed to a lot of writing where the author is throwing in more information than I can retain, and as ...

Hello! Booky here to review, comments in bold! Rebecca: She always said that the world looked brighter from her shoes Eeks! Somehow this sentence is grammatically incorrect. I might sound ...

Hello! Booky here to review, comments in bold! Rebecca: She always said that the world looked brighter from her shoes Eeks! Somehow this sentence is grammatically incorrect. I might sound ...

Hello! Booky here to review, comments in bold! Rebecca: She always said that the world looked brighter from her shoes Eeks! Somehow this sentence is grammatically incorrect. I might sound ...

Hello! Booky here to review, comments in bold! Rebecca: She always said that the world looked brighter from her shoes Eeks! Somehow this sentence is grammatically incorrect. I might sound ...

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This was very cleverly written-a welcome relief from some of the dry crapola one sees! There is a certain air, a je ne sais quoi, that one cannot attain by ...

So, here are my general impressions: You need more background information. it comes across as a bit odd to the reader to find themselves hurled into the plot line...especially because ...

You are so right- my teacher is constantly on my back about "grandiloquence"! I'll tone it down in the actual essay. Thanks so much for your review! Btw, 1984 is ...

Hello, Booky here to review, comments in bold! "Where can i find her?" He stumbled into the bar for the fourth time this week. I really like the opening-sets the ...