bookworm243

I really liked the opening! that was the bit that grabbed my attention it was really great. I think the story is really good although at parts I couldn't really ...

I like how there is a twist to this story and there is a good lot of imagination in this piece so I recommend that you keep the good work ...

this is a very good piece of writing because I can imagine even the tiniest of details in my mind. and also I love the fact that the characters feeling ...