bookworm201

Thing is, the Inheritance Series/Saga/Quadrology/whatever isn't a piece of art. It's a product, Exactly. However unfair it may be. It stinks that he stinks.

I heard Arnold Schw- I won't butcher his name, but you know who I mean- the actor turn CA governor?-- was/was trying to get involved in the negotiations. Writers definitely ...

This has the potential to be great, but more than likely, they will fail and it will be horrible. The prequel type idea is really good- I know my friends ...

Okay, I'm Catholic (ducks and covers)... please don't shoot! And since we're often misunderstood, I am quite good at explaining my religion. By the way, I do know that there ...

Quote: yeah, what is it about peer editing in school that makes it a garanteeed downer? yuo'd figure these people would at least know what grammar is... how in the ...

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- bookworm201 wrote: The Sisterhood of the Traveling Pants books also use quotes well. Ooh, yeah, that was really well do

I won't say all his press is because of his age, but we have to admit some of it is... we just have to hope our well written novels will ...

yeah, what is it about peer editing in school that makes it a garanteeed downer? yuo'd figure these people would at least know what grammar is... how in the world ...

My sister and I have a running gag where I go to her, and she pretends to have one of those long cigarettes that Cruella DeVille had int he DIsney ...

Said, replied, asked, laughed, and cried. Maybe one or two more, but that's really all you need. Too much said is annoying, but the readers should be focused on what's ...

Quotes can be tricky- a good one will have the right "flavor" to it- you know what I mean? But if the quote replaces something that the writer should be ...

What is the worst and best paper you've ever had to peer edit in school? My worst would be a paper where the author used the same phrase twenty some ...

...you like random words because they sound wierd or fun or cool ...you pick out phrases with alliteration and assonace ans internal ryhme and call them cool ...you cringe at ...

The use of simple phrases is great. The last line is a bit stiff though. It's awesomely elegant, though.

Powerful message, but the commas are disruptive. GReat contact with your emotion.