bookworm201

A good summary of one of those universal truths. The change the pov needs to be tweaked, but that's easy enough. As a general rule, pov should be the same ...

the wafers are good as long as they don't have too much wheat.

Body language is key to showing someone's frightened. Since I just got finished with my school play, I have thought a lot about how acting relates to writing. A great ...

Autumnwood High School Presents The Wizard of Oz Cast List (subject to change at director's disretion) Dorothy Gale- Rebecca Kramer u/s Sarah Kramer Professor Marvel/The Wizard of Oz- Michael Rau ...

I will never, ever attend a Church where I have to hold hands. I hate that. It depends with who. For instance, strangers aren't that fun, but people who you ...

Okay, I don't write or really even read werewolf stories, but I'm gonna go out on a limb and say your story sounds good. The character flaws you've introduced are ...

they're the books you read if you just want to read- like chewing bubble gum. It won't fill you up, but at least it gets your mind off of food/reading. ...

looks good to me, but I don't know much about art.

I won an essay contest a few years ago, and from what I remembered, the reason I won was becasue they thought I was consise and knew my topic. If ...

interesting premise, but you need to get in the description of En earlier- I have a feeling that this is something that will be important, so the earlier you learn ...

The description is excellent- you can really feel it. The last three sentences seem to stick out; like everyone's said, they make it feel synopsis-y.

The description is excellent- you can really feel it. The last three sentences seem to stick out; like everyone's said, they make it feel synopsis-y.

Okay, I read somewhere that if you can't think of a title for a story after you're a third of the way through it, you're in trouble. I don't necessarily ...

I have two questions about naming things, but this one's more important- I'll ask the other one later. I want to give a character a certain name, but I have ...

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! not fair... geniuses like her should live longer so we have more to enjoy...