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Once, I was so intent on killing this guy - he was so annoying, everyone else in my family died cause i ingnored them It was annoying

HAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. That is how much, loud and long I laughed. Lol, that was such a good idea! I love: Oh no I have to crap, and

Yes, I liked a lot, but I agree with everyone else, either shorten and grab hold of one idea - maybe her feelings - and create a poem or lengthen ...

I really don't know how you write like that. I love poetry, but I just can't write it. Plus, just wow, that poem is going to be one of those ...

I love the point of view, all basic and childish, that's very effective. And I didn't really know what was going on until the end and that was so sad. ...

V. nice, you have a nice writing style and I would enjoy reading on. I think, sometimes, to get rid of repetitiveity (I know - can't spell) of sentence structures, ...

I think Stephanie Meyer is pretty average. But that was really good. :) I loved it. It's only a joke anyway...I loved it and it was pretty brave of you ...

OOOOOOOO, I LOVE IT. I really like the layout of it and the use of bold and the reptition really works for me. Bloody Kisses give eternal life, take your ...

:) I really enjoyed reading that. The beginnning is extremely engaging, to be honest I was lost in it until the end and now I seriously want more. I really ...

Cooolll :) I am so glad I looked at this! I would love to hear it as a song! I can totally relate to it, and you're really, really good. ...

This is really nice. Your writing is beautiful. I loved it, very touching. I wonder, do you ever find out why his mum forced him to go? Just, overall, wow. ...

10 minutes to go now. Dear Beth, My nerves are yelling. Blondie has just killed a rat; he’s got its tail in his fore finger and his thumb and is ...

[quote="lhighton"] All Flesh Fades It’s eleven-something, I’m vaguely aware of, like I’m vaguely aware that it’s a blazing heatwave today, no damp, and my kids are at the beach with ...

Can I just say that I wrote this when I was twelve going on thirteen so don't expect perfection :)

I think A Thousand Splendid Suns was better...but I get a bit bored by tragedy after tragedy after tragedy...