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Re: Two Souls
I think that you have posted this one too prematurely. there was no conflict yet and i was thinking "so what then?" although your introduction of the characters are commendable, ...
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: The Prince's Mistake
I am not a sucker for romantic stories but i think this was really good. you got a style and it kept me hook til the end. that was a ...
Apr 24, 2010 -
Re: The Prince's Mistake
I am not a sucker for romantic stories but i think this was really good. you got a style and it kept me hook til the end. that was a ...
Apr 24, 2010 -
Re: The Prince's Mistake
I am not a sucker for romantic stories but i think this was really good. you got a style and it kept me hook til the end. that was a ...
Apr 24, 2010 -
Re: How To Begin Your Summer
hiya, first stop, it is nice that you considered putting a caveat at the start, to ward off people who might have misinterpreted this piece. second, this was explicitly written ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Deleted Essay
Hiyah Makar, I think this could do a little polishing. Review is a piece of literature that should be coherent and most of the times concise. You have made an ...
Apr 11, 2010 -
Re: An Open Letter
Dear Dad, How is it going? I have been away from home since spring of last year and I haven't heard anything from anybody since then. Is Carly going to ...
Apr 8, 2010 -
Re: On Politics
Just a thought, may comment (especially Filipinos) ____*************************************************************__________ The 2010 elections are ages away yet the politicians are more than willin
Mar 4, 2010 -
Re: Romantic Fiction Week!
Can we have a fanatsy fic week as well? and get to reward people who reviews relatively more than others? Say we ALL get to give him/her a review on ...
Feb 11, 2010 -
Re: Filipino Story
OK. As soon as I get the cjance, translating it would be awfully hard as the conjugation and use of pronouns are different and might affect the story as whole. ...
Feb 3, 2010 -
Re: Please! Someone save my writing!
it goes well with people who are just keeping it cool... do not pressure yourself too much and do not be too hard on your story machine which is your ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: It Happens
This quite good for a "ten-minuter". It dwells on critical issue that everybody seemed to be afraid of discussing, yes the birds and the bumblebees. Well the point is your ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: Filipino Story
This is written in Filipino, need crtiques of Filipino and those who can understand the language ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Unang Kabanat
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: A Geek's a geek
@Knightly, LOL! Go green archers! LOL
Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: A Portrait of the Artist as a Dying Caesar
Yo, i am not quite a fan of history but i like your story. if history's gonna be taught this way at school, i might stand a chance winning the ...
Jan 27, 2010
