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I saw my Dad step off the car As he carried the usual stack of file He brought home after work And the maid turning the door open for him. ...

"Shawn, this is Craig. Craig, Shawn. you know him don't you?" Matt introduced us that day. I was in that party he threw for the basketball team after winning the ...

Haha, I must say that this piece made me laugh. A love story involving food, yum! Lol. But I guess you can make this into a full-blown short story or ...

He took off his eyeglasses and placed them on top of his study table as he heaved a sigh and closed his mathematics notebook. While checking the time on his ...

hey george man, yeah this is a random story and i think it has quite a potential to be a full-blown story, ya know the standard number of words to ...

yeah, thaks snoink, i think those were potent observations, would keep those in mind, guess i woudl be writing romance stuff in guys' eyes instead, can't seem to have the ...

Hiya poet, I like this poem, reminds of dickinson's.your lines are relatiel short than the conventional and not much rhyming at the end, although i find it quite appealing. this ...

Not a romance writer, just tried this one. This is an unfinished work and I am quite at a loss. Would appreciate comments and suggestions from you guys, and I ...

Hi Layla, your account of your bestfriend's abuse is heroic and commendable. anyway, on the technicals: this is a narrative exposition of Jenny's story through your eyes. alhtough generally, non-ficti

Yo Matthew man, woah,this poem is sure is a mouthful of questions. anyway, i think this is nice, although the resonance of your chosen words are bit awkward, i think ...

hiya smashles, first of all, this is a nice story, and i think you should continue working on this as this has a lt of potentials. alhtough i foind it ...

what i liked with this poem was the resonance of the nature's sounds Thump thump thump The edge, Push off Air whistling around me Splash Down down down it creates ...

hiya tranquility, nice title, it was what caught my attention first, i think that it was quite intriguing so i plunge on. although i am not of poem-person, i find ...

hi hiadel here are my nitpicks: "... starring into the face of a pig" staring? "...he was laying on" lying? "Exiting the jail area through those doors Lazaro found" doors, ...

there wasn't any conflict yet, although your general description of the setting is quite impressive and i think you are also developing your characters fine. you did your research and ...