bookaholicgirl

i liked it, but the ending kinda sucks, i don't know why you hate it though, the first three stanzas are really good. I liked the third stanza the best.

i really liked this one, really deep, i know how you feel. 'A bug is here to feed the toads The plants to give clean air Fishes swim to feed ...

i liked it, you have really good similes in it, especially 'Racing like the shark's prey', very clever. i love the ending too.

All or None. I don't want to lose this I've already lost so much But everything is going against my wishes I can feel it slipping It's sliding through my ...

Alone. I wear a disguise Chameleon Blend into the lies Quiet Can't make a sound Disappear Or I will be found Withdraw I've attained my goal Invisibility But I have ...

Hi, I just joined this site and your poem is the first poem that i have read. I guess i got lucky because I really like this poem and I ...