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i like it, very deep and true.

i like it a lot. i agree completely with waiting until you're older to get married, to live your life to the fullest before settling down. my favorite lines are ...

i like it, i think it's something that everyone can relate to at some point in their life. very good.

hey, i forgot to say that you had very good use of alliteration in this line, "pitiful pretense of pleasure?" and i liked your ending, it felt very strong.

very nice. depressing and angsty. it kinda leaves you hanging, in a good way.

i like it alot, kinda of an angry poem. i love angry poems, i only have one suggestion, instead of saying "fair to your word", i think it would be ...

ahh, very romantic and very pretty. good job.

wow. very good. i liked it alot, deep, dark, but straight and to the point, very good.

i like it, deep, makes you think.

i like it. at first all the commas were annoying and i just went through it without pausing but then i went back and actually paused at the commas and ...

okay i'm gonna be honest, i didn't read the whole thing, only the dialogue, but i laughed my ass off! i'm a big twilight fan too, but let's admit, some ...

i really liked your poem. i really liked "I see London, I see France", at first it was a little confusing but after the last stanza it all comes together ...

okay first off, i saw that u live in dublin ireland, this is probably going to sound weird or lame to u but i want to go there so bad! ...

i really like this poem. it's deep but at the same time not complicated, very straight-forward, an easy and nice read. good job.

All or None. I don’t want to lose this I’ve already lost so much But everything is going against my wishes I can feel it slipping It’s sliding through my ...