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wow lindsay, you're a good writer. I usually write poems, but read many novels so i have an idea of whats good and whats not and trust me, this is ...

Oh I really adore this. It is a poem which displays the emotion that most of us girls have been through. It is bitter sweet in a way but also ...

i love the idea of your story but it is a bit confusing. i spotted a few mistakes too. just an another the an before another should not be there, ...

Well, i like it. I don't think that is enough though, but it just fails to really evoke any emotion in me. i think, try to use more descriptive language ...

wow, it is a lovely piece of work. a great reflection of your mind aswell. i especially love the ending, which effortlessly ties up the purpose of the whole poem. ...

the stick burns, ashes fall. i see your face in the smoke, touch it, but you disappear... and so i watch the ashes accumulate, they are remainders of a burnt ...