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Just something to add....I am always joking, are making a sarcastic remark (nothing mean, erm well, I try not to come across mean). For instance, we could all be in ...

Howdy Chris, my name is Austin, but usually refered to as Bob. I like writing fantasy as well, but I never seam to finish it...all my stories end with the ...

Yes it is a good quote, and one we should all live by and then shortly, all the dorks will band together and take over the world! MUAHAHAH! now...on to ...

I really only had trouble with the second stanza, other then that, I liked this poem. -bobiscool

nice haiku...I have to write one for my class...but they are hard to write. -bobiscool

This is my first acrostic poem...It's for my writing class. I like my poem, but I feel like it's missing something, but can't place my finger on it...hoping y'all will ...

I like the poem, and I like the subject mater. The only thing I found that I didn't like about the poem was this Are you alone in this world? ...

Howdy, I'm new here as well. It's a fun place to be. How many stories have you written? -bobiscool134

I liked this poem "I doubt you ever shed a tear. I gave you many. " "Why can't you see that I truly loved you. For who you are, not ...

haiku's are hard. What is helping me with Haiku's is remembering where they originated, which is China and were used to express the beauty of nature. My advice would be ...

wow...thats a lot of S's...how the heck do you right alterations? I can't figure it out. -bobiscool134

I like this poem. Since I live in Hawaii, I don't get much of the "Winter" feeling, but could feeling winter while reading this poem. -bobiscool134

That was a very moving poem...thats all I can say, I am speechless -bobiscool

Rolling in, fading out Almost like a breath Thunder roars as she walks along But afraid, I am not. I will sit and watch her dance As long as time ...

I liked this poem, it's one of those almost everyone can relate to types of poems. -bobiscool134