blue_Jazzie

First off, I couldn't find anything specifically nit-picky to point out. So kudos to you for that. :] I wish I could say I'd read his work, or at least ...

I really liked this, I Loooove twilight, don't get me wrong. I own all the books and I've seen the movie like three times. I also found this peice really ...

So first the feedback. Take it with a grain of salt. First, In general you're not really supposed to preface stuff. Try not to preface poetry or fiction. If you ...

I couldn’t find any nit-picks that someone hadn’t already mentioned. One thing I did think of though (which someone also mentioned.) Is maybe stick in an excerpt of one of ...

the first thing, really is just more of a question: It was my birthday so I’d make it all up and more through fivers in cards. I noticed that you’re ...

Ok, so first, I won’t post any grammatical nitpicks, since I only noticed a couple and other people pointed them out. :) I’m definitely interested in the story, the character ...