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Re: Unsung Hero
Hey! I like it. It's ironic, and it woke me up from homework, so, great job on that part! I do agree with In silico. You need to add some ...
Sep 29, 2009 -
Re: A Dangerous Dream
First story in a long time. I need some feedback please! It started out with a dream. We never imagined it would go this far, become this dangerous. My name ...
Sep 27, 2009 -
Re: THe Finial Battle
Hey! Nice work, t! :D Nit-picks We are, The defender of dark. No comma after "are". Defenders' is plural. Keeping it at bay, Fighting till the end. I'm not sure ...
Sep 27, 2009 -
Re: Goodnight
Hey! Nice poem! But... I do agree with everybody else. You need a little more punctuation, and your spacing was just... weird. It made me pause in the middle of ...
Sep 27, 2009 -
Re: Child's Play Part One
Hey empress! Ha! I finally found time to do your review, yay! First off, I loved this! Your writing made me cringe several times, which doesn't happen often. *shudders* Especially ...
Sep 8, 2009 -
Re: Child's Play Part One
Hey empress! I can't do your review right now, but I just wanted to say this was really good! I loved it! I promise I'll do your review as soon ...
Sep 5, 2009 -
Re: The Lost City
Hey! Sounds like a great idea! I'll join if you post more about your story. :)
Aug 31, 2009 -
Re: YWS Re-Opens!
Hey Nate! How do you add friends??
Aug 30, 2009 -
Re: Help me I'm Drowning!
Hey empress! Okay, so it looks like you've already read the rules :P, so there's nothing much for me to explain. I haven't actually submitted anything since the new YWS ...
Aug 30, 2009 -
Re: YWS Re-Opens!
Thanks Nate!
Aug 28, 2009 -
Re: Hello/Hi/Hey
Hey OandO (can I call you this for short?)! Welcome to the wacky (and recently improved) world of YWS!!!!! We're glad to have you too! We always love when fellow ...
Aug 28, 2009 -
Re: YWS Re-Opens!
Hey Nate! Are you going to add a member list search? I just find it a little difficult to go through 44 pages to find someone I'm looking for.
Aug 28, 2009 -
Re: Do your characters know that they're not real real?
Well, mine talk to me, but I don't control them or anything. It's just like another person inside of my brain, and they have a mind of their own. Do ...
Aug 25, 2009 -
Re: YWS Re-Opens!
Oh, I just noticed something else. Are stars coming back?
Aug 25, 2009 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hey! Lillie: You don't have to rate your posts, you have rate your work! It should be there somewhere...... :P PadrePio: Manila? Seriously? My parents were born in Manila! I've ...
Aug 25, 2009
