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Re: Hello!
Hey Jonathan! Welcome to YWS!!! I'm Zoe, but most people call me bludragon, or just plain Dragon. You play the drums? I do too! Well, at least, I used to..... ...
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Re: Black Hole
Hey!!! I couldn't really relate to anything in the first couple of stanzas, but when you got the the last part, it opened up what you were trying to say. ...
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Re: Another New Kid
Hey!!! Welcome to YWS!!!! Everyone's really nice here, and will be happy to review your work! I used to have the same problem with inspiration, but if you try to ...
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: Good Morning Starshine
Hey Vonika! Welcome to YWS!!!! You're a photographer? I am too! Well, not really, but I still love taking pictures. Have you noticed our little rainbow yet? Vivacious is blue, ...
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: Well, hello there
Hey! Welcome to YWS!!!! Okay, so there are three basic rules. 1) The 2:1 ratio. That means for every story/poem you post, you have to do two reviews. Reviews are ...
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: Hello Hello
Hey! Welcome to YWS!!! I'm Zoe, but a lot of people just go by my username, bludragon. Or Dragon, to make it short. So, hope you got the basics down. ...
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: 19 year old writer here
Hey! Welcome to YWS!!!! (I keep typing YEW for whatever reason, but, oh, well) June covered the basics, but I'll try to remember what the rest of rules. Oh, I ...
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: Bye! (just kidding)
Thanks Rosey. I'll keep that in mind.
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: Hello, howdy, and aloha
Hey! Welcome to YWS!!!! Has anyone mentioned colored names??? *sigh* Then I will. Okay, so you may have noticed that some usernames are in different colors (green, blue, red, etc.). ...
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: endings
Hey! Great poem! This poem did add in most feelings: sadness, depression, grief, and growing suspension. Which is pretty hard to do in a poem, but I thought you did ...
Jul 4, 2009 -
Re: This Stupid Crush
Hey! I liked your poem! I usually find love poems too cliche for my taste, but this was one rare exception. Your poem was a little to jumpy; it went ...
Jul 4, 2009 -
Re: A Bridge of Colors
Hey and thanks for the help! I enjoyed seeing all of your points of view, and reading certain rewrites of my poem. They were fun to read. Thanks again! zOe
Jul 4, 2009 -
Re: Bye! (just kidding)
Thanks A- Evi. Oh, gods, this is going to be hard, calling you by your username. *sigh* I'll deal with it, sooner or later.
Jul 4, 2009 -
Re: I keep humming each day
Hey! I agree with FLyerS. I'm not positive, but I think you're talking about a soulmate, aren't you? I just keep humming each day. I thought this was a bit ...
Jul 3, 2009 -
Re: those joyful days
Hey! Cool poem! Knowledge has arrived, it's [s] labyrinthine[/s] labyrinth mind Correct those mistakes. S'il vous plait. Put your periods after your stanzas please. Also put your commas in. I ...
Jul 3, 2009
