bludragon525

Hey! I was enthralled. By what she was. What's with this??? Story beginnings usually don't start with two sentence fragments, do they? G'd day Oliver, may I try the pipe? ...

Hey!!!! Great job! There's just a few things I'd like to point out. Being a dream didn’t make it any less real. I had to read this twice to get ...

Wow. Your descriptions are absolutely amazing . I didn't find anything really, except for a few spelling mistakes here and there. “Pain without love.” Three Days Grace I was wondering ...

Hey!!!! This is actually quite good! Some poems that are this short tend to not bring out its meaning fully enough, which leaves the reader confused. This, on the other ...

Banned for being a greeter!

Well, it really depends. I like typing because I can write several rewrites of my story without anything getting too messy. Other times I just like writing by hand.

Congrats to all of you!

Granted, but you write a load of nonsense that no one can understand. I wish that I had something worthwhile to wish for.

Hey!!!!!! I liked your poem! I love rhyming poems, and you made it seem so effortless. *tinges a little green* I wish I could do that. Your rhythm did break ...

Hey! Um, well, I do that a lot, since I tend to get stuck when I'm writing very often. I switch back and forth a lot, and that usually seems ...

Hey! Great! Awesome job. I was grinning and laughing the whole time I was reading this; I must have looked like a madman. I love this story a lot so ...

Wow. That was... fantastic . I could almost see the girl taking the pills at the end. But oh no, mother, two does not suffice. I'll try three, I'll try ...

Hey! I liked this. Both the content and the idea behind in was fabulous. You need a little punctuation to help the poem flow a little bit more, but otherwise, ...

sunrise

Tiger!