bludragon525

Hey! Hm. I don't really know what to think of this poem. I don't dislike it, but I'm not too fond of it either. You're rhythm and rhyme sounded forced ...

9/10 That made me laugh so hard!

Oh my god! I love pandas! 9.5/10

7/10 Chocolate trees? Seriously?

7/10 I like it, but pink isn't exactly my favorite color.... ;)

Hey! This piece is begging for some proper punctuation. Commas, periods, etc.; they all need more work. Um, you could use a ton more detail too. Your words almost seemed.... ...

Oh my gods. I can't wait for this to come out. I'm addicted to the books. I think they picked a good Luke, but I'm not too fond of the ...

Hey Maddy! Welcome to the wacky world of YWS!!! Punk rock, huh? I usually listen to alternative. What's your favorite band? Okay, I'm going to simplify the rules for you ...

Hey! I liked this. The characters felt very real to me, and I could almost "see" the husband abusing the woman. Great job! Dinner on table, children quiet I would ...

Hey! I liked this. I just found a few things here and there.... 1) Damien couldn’t move. He didn’t dare speak. Petrified, he could only gape at Nala’s brazen curiosity. ...

Banned for being happy! :twisted:

Hey Stripes! Welcome to the wacky world of YWS!!!! I'm Zoe, or (more commonly known as) Dragon. You've been writing since you were 13? Cool. I'm 13 right now, and ...

Hey! I liked this poem. It tells a story of someone going back through old photos, each which brings a memory back from that hazy childhood. The imagery was great. ...

Oh, gosh. Sorry, didn't mean to post twice. My internet's been acting up lately.

Hey! I really liked this! There's just a few things I'd like to point out. The night was very frigid compared to a typical September evening in Boston. It was ...