bludragon525

You get milk. -inserts coin-

You get the Sweeney Todd DVD. -inserts coin-

Pineapple, definitely. :D

Hey GoldenQuill! This was fabulous. The short chapter you gave us was utterly captivating, and it was written with ease, something I rarely find anymore. I couldn't find anything wrong ...

Hey! First off, this was fabulous. Your descriptions of your emotions were beautiful and clear, and it was a very fun piece to read. Nit-Picks There he is, walking towards ...

Haha, this is awesome! I can't wait to read the other 100 gruesome tales of death. This was really short, as everyone before me has pointed out. Flesh it out ...

Heyo! I agree, you do have some work to be done. It really is a good start, but it's far too short and too simple. Go into detail! Why is ...

That's awesome, Kamas! I love it. 10/10

10/10 I love it.

9/10 That's really cool.

9/10. Nice.

9/10. I like it.

10/10. Queen rocks. "Holiday" - Green Day "Eye of the Tiger" - Survivor "Every Breath You Take" - Sting "All Star" - Smash Mouth "Help!" - The Beatles

9/10 So very true.... :)

9/10 I like it. :)