bludragon525

Hey moonstar! I liked this. You had a great plot and a good imagery. You had a lot of grammatical mistakes. You spelled a ton of things wrong, and you ...

Hey! Nice poem! You had a lot of emotions packed into it, which flowed rather nicely. If I knew I'd fly away Personally, I would change it to, "If I'd ...

Hey! Vampire stories, huh? I read one really good one, The Reformed Vampire Support Group. It was a really fun mystery, that didn't go over the top with the drinking ...

Banned for using the word "specific"!

I know Tucker. It's good, and I really like it. It just needs a little work, that's all. I'm not saying it's bad or anything.

I'm going to buy a pillow. My couch's getting awfully lonely... ;) Too bad you don't have a pencil case. I'm in desperate need of one of those.

Hey dogs! This whole idea has been overused way too many times. If you really want to make it unique, add your own little twists and turns to it. Express ...

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Hey! I liked your poem. It had a great imagery, and a brilliant ending. Okay, on to the review part... Those taunting words of others Those taunting words of others ...

Hey! I like this. You have a really good idea behind it, but it still could use a little bit of work. You scream with pleasure, “Oh, what a treat ...

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Hey!!!!! I liked this poem. You had a very powerful poem, and I found I could relate to it very well. Now, on to the review.... No one can see ...

Hey! Hm. This was okay. It follows the usual love story, which isn't exactly my favorite theme, but it was okay. I love you but keep praying. What do you ...

I have two. Someone's going to kill me for these. 1) Twilight Aghhhh. I hated this book. I mean, a vampire falls in love with a human? Seriously? 2) Eragon ...

Hey! Awesome job! This poem creates a great imagery of someone who's deeply in love with someone else, yet she faces the the true side of him when he turns ...