bludragon525

Wow. That's fantastic. You've already way surpassed my level of drawing. :oops: I'm not really sure what you should call it. I'm not good with names either. Sorry. Well, great ...

Hey! I liked this. It's simple, easy to read, maybe not terribly powerful, but good all the same. You need to add some punctuation in. It will be a lot ...

We all love Neverland! 8/10

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Hey!!! Wow. Great job, once again. Okay, couple of things. Suggestions mostly, nothing much. “You were asking me something, but I…I have some questions of my own.” His eyes shifted ...

Hey! I liked this! Again, you had a few grammatical errors, but nothing serious. I don't think you're including enough details about your three characters. I know basically nothing about ...

Hey moonstar! I liked your beginning. You could have added a few more details about the acting part, but otherwise, you did a fairly good job. "Hello?" oh no, I ...

Okay. I've got a story here that is set in a futuristic world but has people with powers like teleportation, reading minds, or anything along those lines you can come ...

Hey! This was a bit confusing. You're showering us with too many images, and the reader can hardly connect to this piece at all. Things to think about: 1) Meaning. ...

Hey! Okay, have you read the rules yet? If you haven't, I would suggest reading them, since you just broke one. Moving on.... You had a lot of both grammatical ...

Hey! Welcome back, I guess. I'd really like to read your stories someday, since I have trouble writing short stories, and they all turn out longer than they should be. ...

Hey! I loved this poem! You had a great idea and imagery, and I loved how you got everything to rhyme well. You had a few awkward parts, but octocoffee ...

Hey! Yep, you have to review another person's poem/story. It's not that hard to get three lines; as long as you point out a few mistakes and say what you ...

Hey! Great job! You had an awesome idea, and a good imagery. I loved both your beginning and your end. the light fireflies leave behind when they cut through. Okay, ...

Hey Star! Welcome to the wacky world of YWS!!!! I'm Zoe, but a lot of people call me Dragon. Something to do, huh? Summer gets pretty boring after a while, ...