bludragon525

I would probably make a tiny tent out of it with another stick or a pencil and pretend it was an elf's house. :)

True..... 8/10

Hey! This was really good! Your descriptions were amazing, and I loved the way you introduced the characters. I only found one mistake, which was in your very first sentence. ...

Interesting..... 8/10

8/10 Cool avatar. :)

Banned for living in the land of the free. :P

Percy Jackson and the Olympians (I'm addicted to these books) Harry Potter Maximum Ride The Blue Girl by Charles de Lint Howl's Moving Castle A Connecticut Yankee in King Arthur's ...

Hey lily! Here's my review for you! Nitpicks “But Nana, can’t you just be born with so much good that you can never be evil ? Like fairies or princesses ...

Hey! Hm. It's pretty good, for a poem written on the spot. I would suggest switching some of the lines, though, so it would go something like this: I listen. ...

Easter

Evi told me. We've been friends since forever. :) Well, it seems like forever anyway.

Banned for being a girl. (where did I even come up with that ?)

Hey! Awesome job! There's just a few things I'd like to point out. The Characters: You need to include a little more detail about Thorn. Thorn, as of now, feels ...

nucleus

I'm addicted to the Percy Jackson series.... Rick Riordan did mess up a lot of the Greek myths, but he mostly got them right. I've been reading the greek myths ...