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Re: Unexpected Happenings
Chapter 1: Unexpected Happenings There are three things in the world that I love. Hot, humid weather, clear dark nights, and bodies of water. The three things that brought me ...
May 23, 2010 -
Re: Religion
i can easily relate to this poem, all together i thought it was very good
Mar 3, 2010 -
Re: the life of mary
WELLLLLLLL not exactly great, :elephant:
Feb 21, 2010 -
Re: Crossing the Street
This poem is very good,however you need to pin point the main idea a little bit more. Reading this, I got the message that it was about growing up and ...
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: What am I?
Hi iCarlyfan! I just wanted to say I really enjoyed this poem. There really isn't anything that needs to be changed about it. Keep writing!
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: Unknown
An open carriage bound through the night, passing a village where even the servants slept soundly. Stardust fell among the homes. A ray of sunshine reflected off the glass onto ...
Feb 14, 2010 -
Re: The First Season
Thirteen years of living Pass me by on this chill winter evening where even the snowmen hover over the fire struggling to keep warm Tiny claws scratch at my toes ...
Feb 14, 2010
