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Re: A World So Cold
Broken and open Alone and scattered Confused and left behind to die. The brutal horror of a shattered heart. Empty. Rage and unrelenting anger. Infuriating. Smash your fist against a ...
Aug 1, 2010 -
Re: Ghosts
i really liked this. it was kind of confusing, but then again, i didnt really take the time to think about it. haha. i just liked the words and the ...
Aug 1, 2010 -
Re: The Pain Inside </3
wow. i really really love this poem. i have nothing bad to say about it. everything was like, perfect. i love your vocabulary, and the way you put things. i ...
Aug 1, 2010 -
Re: Love
i love this poem. it expresses the feeling that most people are afraid to talk about. the feeling that love is non-existant..... or that you're afraid to feel love because ...
Aug 1, 2010 -
Re: Suicidal
personally i really liked the poem, because i understand the emotion in it. yes, i agree with the other comments, the rhyme scheme is a little off, but that is ...
Jul 31, 2010 -
Re: Anguish
i thought it was really good. i totally could understand the pain you were feeling and what you were talking about. i could picture it in my mind as if ...
Jul 31, 2010 -
Re: Screaming Silent Prayers
Am I too lost to be saved? Will the pain never end? It’s always there, constantly stabbing my heart like lightning in water Reminding me of my stupid mistakes My ...
Jul 31, 2010
