bloodyblackrose

passionate. i thought it had a lot of heart and longing in it. it was obvious to me that this is something you really want, and the poem portrayed that. ...

the whole 'i miss you, i need you' thing was a little annoying. but i still think you should repeat it, maybe just not as much. and i loved this ...

i liked it. up until she got into the argument with her mother it was a bit boring, but the argument was something that sounded real. it didnt seem like ...

i loved this poem. other than a few grammatical errors, i thought it was very well-written. and yeah, maybe it is a little confusing, but that's the whole idea. the ...

love love love love love love love love it. end of story.

i dont know what firestarter's problem is, i thought it was a beautiful poem. i loved the rhyme scheme, and i didnt think it was messy at all. disregard all ...

intense. i LOVE IT! this is exactly my favorite type of writing. dont give it up and dont change it, no matter what anyone says.

wow. this was really intense. very emotional, and can appeal to all types of people. theres soooo much in this. there was a few spelling errors and the sentences didn't ...

i thought it was really good. you've got the whole 'streams of consciousness' deal going on. it doesn't have to make sense. well.... maybe a little lol. but it was ...

ahhah well actually this poem was an assignment for english class last year. we were supposed to write a 'beatneck' (or however you spell it) poem, and those kinds of ...

heyyy, so. u r sitting right next to me, but i need the points hahahah. sooo heres wht i think. i think: really good. its my type of writing. i ...

well, firestarter, this is not "self-therapy". it is how i express my emotions, and if u dont like it, then dont read it. and yes, there are people out there ...

i like your vocabulary. this poem was really thought-provoking. i got really intrigued, especially by the fact that the "angel" seemed to be cold and cruel, yet beautiful at the ...

i thought this poem was very well-written. you should keep writing like this, because i think it expresses your emotions really well. even if you weren't truly feeling that way, ...

i really liked your rhyme scheme. and i liked how you started each stanza with 'dreaming of', it was like you were making a list of things that you were ...