blondeshorty01

Rage, pounding, thoughts hounding, Screaming, hurling, hatred swirling. Black as coal, a heart so cold, in my little hold..... Just one time, one last rhyme. I cannot hide, or escape ...

hi!!!!!!! i spend a bit too much time in the poetry selection :) heh....anyways, on with the review!!! must say the only thing i can find off is the title, ...

i LOVED IT!!!!! no, seriously! it was THAT good!!!! of course it's a short story, but, i still think you should give more detail, it's like hanging a bone in ...

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! haha it was adorale! but, a it overused, don't you think??? oh well! you made it your own, and even added some dialoge!!!! that's pretty awesome! nice job!!!! ...

Deep, dark, inside of me, caged in is this beast. Snarling and snapping, yet the audience is clapping, merrily, unaware of the danger, it is to anger. Every voice inside ...

it was really good! i liked it a lot, although i hope the chapeters get a little more exciting. i don't much care for Vamp stories, so, hahaha :) “Seemed ...

This was amazing and captivating! this seems so, reat! i cannont find anything wrong with it, and got totaly sucked in to the poem!!!! you have a complex, yet simple ...

ummmm just stating, you said "The sun didn’t shone through the clouds which was strange, it wasn’t night. I ignored it though." would it not be 'shine' insted of 'shone'?

this is written from two peoples point of view, i've never done this before, and i'm not to good at love poems, so bare with me :) If the rivers ...

well, the'll get longer duing the book, trust me! :D

I was picking at the lace on the last pillow my mother ever made, before she died of hypothermia. It was a baby pink, with soft white lace all around. ...

i adored it, the history was accurate, and the charters were well thought out. but, what did they do to be killed and/or arrested???? it's nagging at me XD

What is love but a word? An overused phrase? Love is a mix, With every emotion in it. For me, at least. What is love, but a lie? An over-used ...

See the fireworks? Red’s, white’s, blue’s. The colors reflecting in your eyes, Making them shine, shine, shine! The streetlights, so very dim, Make’s your dark, tousled hair, Electrifying! I l

YOUR MOM IS SOOOOOOO LUCKY!!!!!!!! :D *sniff* that was beautiful, but i kind of guessed it, did you mean it to be that easy?