blondeshorty01

Look people, of your against gay right's or homosexuals, don't read it, I don't need haters, it could be an eye-opener though. You read at your own risk, if you ...

again you impress me! You work is super awesome!!!

you say your no good at endings? You LIAR!!! haha :) it was in the worst good, and emo poem are hard enough, but thank GOD you weren't all "i ...

It was super!! but in the being, don't explain in detail soooooooo much! It makes it SUPER boring after a while. and you said "i founded proof..." you mean found ...

I awoke to faint hoof beats that seemed to grow closer. I tried to stand but slid back, and with a start I realized why. I screamed, looking at my ...

this was wonderfuly short and easy to read, you have a gift to gt a point across in a few lines, whereas it takes me a few stana's to do ...

this was wonderfuly writtedn and well thought out, the ending was un-suspected, because you thought the woman was going to fight it and win, although i must say it was ...

your style is nice, ligt, and simple. It's a welcomed break from the over-worded, under-thought poems i keep comming across, just a few little, things, 1. kinda over used the ...

well, here's another 'emo' poem i wrote long, long ago :D so, bare with me, i'm not so good at short poems, pleas, rip it apart :twisted: The tears fall ...

STANZA'S STANZA'S STANZA'S!!!!!!!! haha, that is one of the most important, yet hardest, part of poetry! but without them, the poetry get's clumped togther, and harder to read, a bit ...

This is short and sweet, yet complex at the same time....i love that about poetry, that and teh emptions that people put into it, i thik you were blessed to ...

]This is just another one of my hopeless crap poems about..... well that's for me to know, and you to guess about :wink: RIP IT APART!!!!!!! Can you believe, how ...

I don't quite understand, you say her wool is black, then you say it's white? Are you trying to say something like on the outside they were the same, but ...

I honestly don't get what's going on here, did the person you love commit suicide? Because that's all i can come up with.... anyways.. these lines kind of didn't quite ...

It was a simple read, smooth on the eyes, i could easily relate, but again "blow" is putting the whole stanza, therefore the whole poem, at an awkward place. Your ...