blazingstars06

“Who is she? What is she?” It was the woman who answered. “I am the goddess Anomi, patron of Man.” “Amira is the youngest in a family who are the ...

As he sprinted along the pavement, Alex muttered curses on his scatter-brained mother and his prim, nosy little sister. He was late for school again, and it really wasn’t his ...

Hello! This is my first piece of writing to be posted here, but I'd still appreciate helpful and honest criticism. This is just the prologue so there's no real plot ...

“Move boy!” Put a comma between the words, as 'boy' is a form of address. The stench of his hot breath made my skin curdle in disgust... Skin can't curdle, ...

"The field before then was lush green with orange feathery rushes growing." 'Before them', perhaps? And growing where? From the clouds onto the field? "Robin had climbed the tree earlier, ...

-slaps thigh- Darn, I forgot that one! Thanks very much, I'll strive to wring every last drop of enjoyment from the site that I can. (Yes, I am a drama ...

Well... Howdy! I'm new here and thought I'd just say hi. I can even say it in German (Guten Tag!) or French (Bonjour!) or even Italian (Bonjourno!) but it all ...