blackwings_angel

nice dude BUT i know but, { du dun dunn dunnn :twisted: } it sounds too much like your a narrator. try and make it seem like the poem isnt ...

yeah dude i had a huge page of mistakes i found but i accidently deleted it so im hoping u can find them on your own good luck and well, ...

this is really good!!! i love the emotions tarin has and the relationship between him and his sister. I hope you keep writng. I only have a few questions im ...

this was pretty good, except i wouldnt no the situtaions in it seeing how im a guy, but yea it sounds really good. C'est bien! :D its really good au ...

that sounds cool but unfortunelty i have no idea what it means, wasnt some of those lines from Macbeth? Im not sure i never am :( i'll say something again ...