blackwings_angel

alright danny here we go i agree with anthony yeah the last stanza would make a good book but yeah you may not want this under poetry it hardly rhymes ...

A boy walks in the night a torture soul who's lost his inners seem to fight his heart knows the cost with all their might they fight the path he ...

im afraid i have to agree with them all :( work on this one

nice dude BUT i know but, { du dun dunn dunnn :twisted: } it sounds too much like your a narrator. try and make it seem like the poem isnt ...

yeah dude i had a huge page of mistakes i found but i accidently deleted it so im hoping u can find them on your own good luck and well, ...

"Innocnce is nonsense these days. That's what grandfather used to always say. Sometimes on days like these i agree." from the diary of Tairen Zyiak January 12th, 1352. Tairen walked ...

this is really good!!! i love the emotions tarin has and the relationship between him and his sister. I hope you keep writng. I only have a few questions im ...

When Firecrow, arrived at the Taku Island meeting with Eve, Bulls Eye and Myakka, a sense of uneasiness was upon them. People stared at them as though they were devilish ...

“Guardian Firecrow, I need to ask you an important question.” The young Ankh Indian named Aviator or in the Ankh language “one with the winged,” said. “Yes Aviator how can ...

On November 17, 9999 young Simon Baxter rode home on the hover bus. In his seat television he watched bioball a sport played by mutated alien dogs, a form of ...

As the battle continued to streak on, Firecrow snuck under the rough raised section in the lower right hand section his village. As he crawled under the hatch and across ...

the sun rise above the horizon, and darts between the clouds orange lights turn the sky on sun shining out loud day rushes by, through time and space time seems ...

oui oui! thanks for all the help guys, i'm just getting into poetry

i cant believe no one has said anything about this yet........ i'v ehad it up here for a while :(

Why does the world turn? why Is the grass green is it sick? Why do wonders hide within the ferns? Why do we call a young river a crick? who ...