blackwings_angel

I liked it. Who's this amazing singer you wrote about? You should do more poetry it really works for you

I really liked it full of emotion th eonly thing I have to comment on is spelling errors, just little mistakes like claming instead of calming and bead instead of ...

You know you repeated a few words like 7 times. I'm just pointing it out and i thought it was kinda funny.

does it relate to anything? I'm just wondering. I mean, does the toranado mean anything besides a tornado? :? Am i confusing you?

Aro set down his knife, and looked to the trees. He caught a glance of light red hair, that flowed through the wind, it was a girl. He went into ...

the ground rumbled under Vayku's feet. He pushed the horse into a sprint, climbing up the slowly inclining slope. As he reached the top of the hill he saw a ...

nice very lyric make it longer and hey it maybe a top 10 on the charts. then ew can pop the chapagne and... wait :cry: oh yeah the likwid monkez ...

Aro walked through the forest, its shadows bathing him in darkness and stealth. A deer stood a few hundred yards away from him eating at some berries. He drew his ...

here are the rules: -describe your character, that's easy enough. -keep it on a fantasy level, we don't need it to jump to a science fiction -make sure that your ...

Meanwhile, Zayku rode upon his noble steed, who was tired after tracking the elf. He was now on the plains, a dangerous place for him. He could be seen miles ...

May I join? this too is a first for me Name ~ Zayku Gender ~ male Hair ~ Dark blonde, shaggy and somewhat long {think of Eragon at the beginning ...

"My world has been turned upside down. I feel as though I have fell into the rabbit's hole, and Alice is nowhere near to catch me. The rabbit of this ...

alright well it was okay. First of You kind of had a info dump about joshes apearance spread the information out a little we don't need an entire description in ...

"Shadows have stalked my every move. I feel as though I am not alone. The crows that once followed my father now follow me. I am starting to dread my ...

*laughing hysterically* thanks Dan, but you make me sound like a pro I'm not that good. And if you want to read good read a senior writers pieces :wink: but ...