blackwings_angel

Baer smiled up in his tree. The girls were smart, hid from strangers. He had been watching them for a few days, hoping they had food. "maybe," Baer thought "If ...

Name --Baer Gender --Male Race --human Hair --Shaggy black curls Eyes- --Emerald green Weaknesses -- is quite greedy --usually doesn't get a full meal and is almost always hungry. Strengths ...

Zayku shook hi shead in pain. He was lying in a heap on the ground, breathing heavily. He must of been hit in the head by something hard. Zayku thought. ...

Lyokto watched the awkawrd human rituals on the otherside. Humans were so weird. He would kill off the wretched group if it wasn't for his shoulder. He would have to ...

liar. Just to let you know dude, you really need to slow down and figure out what your typing.

That sounds really cool! If you did post some of it already let me know. If not, let us know when you've finished it.

yeah i was about to say the same thing as Misspriss but she beat me to it. Good job, you should write more poetry

5/9 I don't like th ewhole God as a joke thing :?

Love is a package received by all Miss one step you take the fall Love can heal love can hurt Love can come and go like flirts The package is ...

no offnese Dan but this REALLY isn't good. Start over and kill teh rhymes your not a gangster.

Am I the only normal writer in this storybook. THe rest of you are seniors. HAHAHHA I'm in my golden years while you guys are old and need walkers. :P ...

I relally liked it. But I noticed towards teh end you seemed to lose some of your rhtym. Then in the last stanza you got it back. Way to go ...

I love eragon. Too bad the movie was nothing like it. This is great! You are really poetic, and this is just like.... WOW Ayra wrote this. Do you like ...

6/10 its old school and just makes youi laugh thinking about the good days when we were 7. 8)

okay so like, OH I'm blanking out. like Drake from your story?