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Re: [deleted]
Love it! Keep writing. By the way, when are you coming back to Banneker?
Jan 17, 2008 -
Re: You Gonna Eat That?
I wasn't talking about you Azila, I knew you got it. I was talking about other people who read it and didn't get it. And to MadHatter, a used nigger ...
Jan 17, 2008 -
Re: You Gonna Eat That?
I'm surprised that a lot of people get the joke. If you don't get the joke, read the last 2 lines again.
Jan 16, 2008 -
Re: Last Place
I thought this was great. My friend, Jomel, wrote this in 15 minutes. He asked me to put it on the internet, so I did. I hope you will like ...
Jan 16, 2008 -
Re: The Goodbye Gift
Thank you for your great feedbacks! :D :D :D
Jan 16, 2008 -
Re: Cancerous Dreams
I like the poem.....little bit of spelling errors....but spell check can help that. Anyway keep writing! :) :)
Jan 15, 2008 -
Re: Seniors!
One more semester for y'all! Then Class of '09 is takin' over!!!! :D :D :D
Jan 15, 2008 -
Re: Summer
Thanks you two. I will try to write more sonnets and hope to get better at it. :)
Jan 15, 2008 -
Re: The Color Black
Thank you all for your wonderful critiques. I really apprioate it. I admit that it wasn't my best work, but hopefully I will get better. :)
Jan 15, 2008 -
Re: Summer
I can't wait until summer starts.
Jan 14, 2008 -
Re: Deleted
Damn, that was deep. Too deep. Loved it :D :shock: You should write more poems.
Jan 14, 2008 -
Re: The Color Black
Why? Why are girls blindsided? Females have complex minds, As males are single minded. I'm in a class of all boys Their girlfriends should hear. Some girls know that there ...
Jan 14, 2008 -
Re: Tasty in pink!
I like it because I read it as the poem was extremely sexual but said it in a way the everybody could read it. Do you know what I mean? ...
Jan 11, 2008 -
Re: Deleted
I liked it very much. I captured my attention like a story should. Please write more. Excellent work! See you at school. :D
Jan 10, 2008 -
Re: Iowa wins for Huckabee and Obama
Just like Rickage, I'm glad that Bush is gone. I just want to put it out there that just because there is a black person running for office doesn't mean ...
Jan 4, 2008
