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Thanks ana. Wolves, I can't wait to read your book and more of your poems! :elephant:

Wow, both of the poems you wrote were extremely good. :D You'll be a novelist before long.

I like it. It sends a powerful message to parents to watch their young ones. Keep writing! :elephant:

Thanks Kelsey! :D

Oh, sorry Silly. I think I know what you mean. I don't think there is one.

It doesn't have a rhyme scheme because it was a free verse poem, Silly.

Krazy Kool! I probably will get to my 1000 post on my 19th birthday next year. :D Now thrive for 2000. :smt041

Beautiful. Just beautiful. You captured the light and color perfectly. Great job! :D

What's good? My name's Brooke. The only thing we have in common is that we both had braces. For my question: Who are you for for president (If you could ...

If I had wrote this I would had revised it. But, I'll tell him what he needs to work on. Thanks for reading!

Yeah Emma, we do keep calling ourselves "niggas" to each other, which it's sad. My school and neighborhood is all black (including me) and we use that word religously. And ...

Haha. Clever. i like it

Glad you're back! :D :D :D

Thank you all for your comments.

This was a very great poem. Keep up the excellent work. I would love to read more.