blacktiger3915

I love how you describe things. I really like this story. See you and don't get mad at Patterson. Just poison his food! :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

Not to be rude, but even though in was informative, it was boring to read. It was long and the lines were too close together. Keep writing though.

I liked this poem. I liked how you wrote to lines then wrote a question at the end. Keep writing unrhymed poems and rhymed.

Thanks, I appreciate the marvelous comments. :D

Thanks scotty. I spaced the lines because people told me to double space. Anyway, I will correct the errors.

I didn't like this, but I think if you would have put more thought to it, it would have been good. You should move this to other poetry. Adios!!!!!

Thank you lakegirls! I will try to write a sequel. I thought they moved it to the other fiction section.

Thanks darkdove! See you at lunch!!!!

Thanks y'all!!! You're real friends :D :D :D

You took the words right out my mouth, but I don't know how to move it to the fiction area.

Thanks sweetie! Glad you liked it. Believe it or not I wrote this while in my 4th period class.

The story takes place in a far away land. With hills and trees as far as you can see. A white castle sat at the top of the largest hill. ...

Thanks invalidkarma! I like your name. :)

I am not in love!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! God...........I hope I'm not in love. I'm just in the 11th grade! I don't want to be in love with somebody who isn't in love ...

Forget them! People can read it. They know that they won't have many books in high school and college that are double spaced. So they can get used to it. ...