blacktiger3915

I loved you. I loved you. You were the polish for my toes, But now you're the toe jam. You were the cherry on top of my sundae, But now ...

I'm sorry, but I didn't like this poem. But I know in the long run, your stories and poems will be much better. Best wishes! :)

I liked this poem. I wish there was more to it, but all in all, it was good. Keep writing! :D

How dare you say that women don't care about the bigger things in life, you sexist pig! I care about the economy, politics, etc. You probably want a "50's" housewife ...

Hello my name is Akeelah and I hate taking baths!! :smt011

I will first trap them, then burn them! :twisted:

Hey! My name is Brooke or blacktiger3915. Welcome to YWS! I will love to see your work and say what I feel (not in a harsh way of course). Good ...

I rather be mute. I like sign-language. Plus, I want to hear and see my future children and grandchildren.

They all took the words right out of my mouth. Serious editing is needed. I was so bad that I can't tell if the story was good or not. I ...

Thank you Aedomir! I will make sure I will correct the errors. :D

I liked the Scottish language in the story. Yes, please space, but other than that, keep writing! :D

It was good. I'm mad that I didn't understand it fully, but I know it had a deep meaning to it because I know how you think. Keep up the ...

Thanks Big Bad Bear! :D

Nice story. The grammar was a little off, but otherwise, I say keep writing. :D

Beautifully written. I liked it. Keep up the good work! I would love to read more. :D