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I'm argeeing, this is clearly not a poem, but it really can be one. Just put the words into stanzas, and bam! you'll have a poem. I can't wait to ...

Nice. Very nicely written. I won't to read more pretty please! :D

I liked it. Keep up the good work. Post more please. :)

Terrible. I made my head hart. Please fix this or take it off the web cause I don't want anybody to read this anymore until it's fixed. Sorry I was ...

It's better than what I could have done, but your drawing needs some work if you want to pursue it. Anyway, keep working at it! :D

Both are cute. I wish your poll had an option that said both. :D

Welcome to young writers' society! The poem was quite good. But I have to agree with gryphonfledgling though. I can't believe that an eight year old girl could say this. ...

It was ok. Just ok. It was like a read this somewhere before. I don't know. I'm just talking outside of my neck. Keep writing. :wink:

Does anybody have a tissue? The last two stanzas made me cry even more! :smt022 Keep writing please!!!!!!!

Thanks girl! I'll surely stop by and read it! Talk to you later. :D

Reading this made me feel like I was reading an extremely long text message. I got what you were saying, but....... I agree with the others. Keep up the work ...

It was ok. Don't ever apologize to the readers about what you think about your poem before hand. Let them make their own predictions. Anyway keep up the good work. ...

Thank you darkdove! I hope other people like it. :?

Whats up girl? I liked the poem (tear) :smt010. Great work. I miss my boyfriend!

I liked the picture. It looks like a storm is brewing in the distance! Get out the way! :lol: