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I liked it, but for some reason it came to me as being a typicial heart-felt poem. Anyway don't mind me, keep writing. :D

I think I only read two of your works so for and I can tell that you are an outstanding writer. Keep it up and I will be happy to ...

Ditto (of all the above). Good poem. Adios :smt028 !

This was great. I loved it. Wow :shock: . I give it :smt023 but two. :D Keep up the good work!

It's pretty good. I'm with everyone else, it needs some work. But all in all, it was okay. Best of luck! :D

I sat there on the edge of my bed (bad form, this is narrative) Pondering to myself...I felt like I were dead. (Doesn't flow) There I sat. Sat. (Doesn't work) ...

I'm glad you mentioned that it was a haiku. But i still don't like it very much. I have read many good haiku's and this isn't one of them. Sorry, ...

Nice. I liked it very much. Great job though!

Thanks..... I guess. :) :?

You start off with friends, then your group keeps on getting; (Why the colon?) smaller and smaller every year. Soon you will be alone. Have you ever been lost? You ...

I liked this poem. I think trees are beautiful any way and you really captured the beautiness of the growing process of the tree. Loved it. Great writing, I can't ...

I liked this. For some odd reason though, this poem has a "Queen of the Dammed" feel to it. I don't know I guess I have a weird mind. Anyway, ...

Thanks for the review! :D

Very nice. Very nice indeed.... Anywho...lsilvernail is right on the errors,but, all in all the piece was good, Keep up the good work! :)

Thanks darkdove! Like the new avatar. :wink: