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Hhhmm.... I'm trying to think. I going to ask darkdove for help. She writes good stories. Can it be violent? I love violence! More blood I say!

Ooh I liked this. "I am the black cloud". Love this saying! Great job.

Wow! :shock: This is beautiful! I love it! Wow!

I liked this poem! Adorable, just adorable! Nicely done! Great!

Thank you casey_kent! I love having dreams. They're wonderful! I love your sig! Jesus is great. Keep praising Him and you will be blessed :D. Anyway, best wishes!

I'm agreeing with TL G-Wooster. Good job darkdove! See you 4th period!

You're not so bad at poetry. This was quite good actually. I know that if you keep trying, you will be a great poet. Best wishes!

We didn't say it needed to rhyme to be a poem. It needs a flow, stanzas, or some kind of structure, and if it doesn't rhyme, the poem should be ...

Nicly done and very creative! Great job.

Thank ya'll very much. I'm happy now.

I am on the Christians' side at all times. But please don't get to cocky!

I love this! It makes me not want to be an actress anymore. I'm going to college instead. Harvard here I come! LOL :lol: :smt005 :smt082

I enjoyed reading this poem. It's really good. Keep uo the good work!

I'm in agreence with Vernon. He took the words right out my mouth. :P

This doesn't seemed like poetry at all. It doesn't flow and it isn't structured like a proper poem should. You should try to rewrite this. Good luck and best wishes!