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The whole poem was redundant to me, "She touched the dead body." "The face didn't breathe." I hated this. Other than that the poem was okay.

Okay, but when other countries get into trouble who do they usually run to? I think America......

This poem was okay like every one said. Anyway, welcome to YWS and I hope to read more of your works.

Ummm...first of all, welcome to young writers society!!!! :D Now, the poem, I really didn't like it. There were a lot of errors in the poem which made the poem ...

True, but every country as it's ups and downs. That doesn't mean the country isn't less great.

Lunch is the best subject ever!!!!! Your courses are...meat, bread, dessert, choice of drink, and etc. The next favorite is science, especially chemisty! Now I'm in AP Physics :smt019 .

I believe He's both.

I'm online! This was an okay poem. Keep up the good work!

I like how rawly written this is. It's pretty honest and to the point. I didn't see much wrong with it. Just one part you forgot to capitalize Rook and ...

Nice picture OverEasy.

Nice... it's better than what I can do.

It's nice..but it's not believable to me. Did you draw this? :?

I love this! The shading is beautiful! Wow! It's a good looking man. Please keep drawing.

Cool poem. Keep writing! :D

It was good. I don't think America isn't that great, but the poem was okay.