blackstorm

Ya gonna make a wish Hatter? No? Alright then, I'll make a wish. I wish... that I had a pet dragon who is completely kind and would never hurt another ...

and played some...

scars

I always thought that the Taste Fairy was related to the Tooth Fairy.

Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...

Granted, but then they discover that they suck at videogames, kill themselves, and then all online games are shut down by the government. I wish that I could actually spell.

I liked it, very original. However, just one thing that concerns me. In the "i can’t function with you in my head. and so i drink." line is there supposed ...

I really don't know what to add. What really caught my attention though was that the rhythm was sort of off and that the "Love is sacred." line should probably ...

Give to me a ship to sail, And I'll sail the ship for thee, Give to me but a mast and sails, And soon the far shore we'll see, For ...

*Awestruck look on face* Wow... Did you write any more chapters? If so, let me know. :wink:

Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...

(MadHatter, I love ur new av. So cute!) droop lid

Granted, but now every time you put something on them it disappears. I wish that my business class wasn't so boring.

I think that everyone else already talked about what I could find, so I'll just throw my two cents in... GOOD JOB!

Good poem. I liked the images that your poem invoked in my mind. Only two things that I can really think of are that there needs to be a little ...