blackstar

I liked it but I think you have someone spelling mistake. I think haughty is supposed to be naughty and fiend is supposed to be friend. AND BULLETS ROCK!!! But ...

You can always wear miniskirts. :p And if not skirts, how about shorts? It was really funny!

I think your story might be interesting, I will read the next part later. But as most others, I think that the 1st part was rushed. You should add some ...

I am sitting on a couch beside mom and dad in the school psychologist’s room. I was injected a week ago. I was medicated. After I woke up I found ...

Damn it! I should've chosen google!! I didn't really read all the options, so I just chose 'other'. I randomly googled 'Young writers' and it came up, that's pretty much ...

The same thing as others, you should make a sequel. The story seems unfinished. Even if the writer makes the impression that there might be something more, it doesn't exactly ...

true, I hate it when ppl try to change me or say something about me. I am always gonna be just the way I am ppl!! There ain't nothing you ...

first of all, loved it. second of all, great use of words! But it didn't quite do it for me. I mean, the story was great! And it sort of ...

haha, it was funny. But poor jeremy... AND VAMP SKUNK ROCKZZ!!!

Suddenly my phone rings, I take it out of my pocket and answer it, "Hello?" "Hey, it’s me, Ethan!" "Oh! Hey Ethan!" “Are you alright?” “Yeah, I’m... I’m fine.” "I ...

"So, Nina, what are you doing this Saturday?" "I don't know..Ethan asked me to go see a movie with him. Do you think I should go?" "Do you want to ...