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Re: My Son is Gay
It was amazing! Really awesome that you pulled it off just with dialogue. I love it! I don't write anymore and I just come to yws once or twice a ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: the last words
*Looking at my review* Woah!! That's big!! But not much of actual reviewing though... plz don't hate me for not giving you an actual review with serious criticism and everything... ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: the last words
What you wrote is something I can relate to. If I'm going to die, I'm entitled to say a few words. Am I right? I don't feel free, I don't ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: The F.U.N. Song.
F= Finally finishing something!! and not giving up U= U liked it!! I AM SOOOOOOOOOOO HAPPPYYYYY!!!!!! N= Now, I guess I'll move on to reading and writing other stuffs :p ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: I Can't Believe It
Normally, The guy should do this, that's why. But, 86% of guys expect the girl to make the first move. It was sweet story and also a bit funny. He ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: Silent Screaming
The clicking of the clock ceases to start, As all time is frozen like solid water, The wind is still between each bare blowing, All that is moving, a silent ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: terrorist?
I am never going to get why most ppl think that all muslims are terrorist. Just 'cause some shitheads 'caused 9/11 they think that everyone of them are terrorists!!! Why? ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: Mirror, mirror on my wall
When I was writing this, I was writing this as a song. So I guess these are lyrics. And I just put together random words, I don't know what this ...
Jun 12, 2011 -
Re: Thoughts of a Call-Girl
I don't have much to critique, all I just can say is: I loved it
Jun 12, 2011 -
Re: Origami animals, flowers and dinosaurs
Wow, your good at this! And I specially liked the first one, the Archeopteryx. (Killer-falcon-dino bad ass)
Jun 12, 2011 -
Re: Love gun
Wow, your good at this! I really loved how you sketched it. It's fine work, really. Although I am no specialist in this area, but as a genuine person who ...
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: Pengu frenzy
"Why! Why won't they come!!?" He says to himself, "What is wrong with those young fairies, why won't they come to school!!?" The principal of 'Fairyland high' talks to himself ...
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: A dreame
'where people are together no blacks no whites no defined rights every one together' ... You are a typo freak, and I am the hated semi-perfectionist editor who sometimes types ...
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: lost change of love
Dude, you seriously need to add more details. And I mean add "Conversations" not details to the rape part. People will rate your story 18+ and hate you for life!! ...
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: There's a Decepticon on My Wall
Really funny. Poor you! You have to sleep at night knowing that a decepticon is in your house planning to destroy the world :( :p I wish that it was ...
Jun 2, 2011
